Heavenly Present…!!




Just look at a baby of three or two,                                                                                                                                                                                                       Not the years but months of course,                                                                                                                                                                                                   Serve your problems with a hew,                                                                                                                                                                                                         Feel its innocence, thats worth crores!

Not a little care,
For the passing time.
Nor does it worry,
About earning a dime!

Countless steps,
It tries to take,
Thinking not,
Of a single stake!

Breaks its toys,
And between them,
It flounders!

All day it does,
Sleep or pry,
Or indulges its mother,
With laugh and cry!

Innocence in its face,
So pure!
For all your unrest,
Its the cure!

Countless faces,
It does make,
Not a single one,
Being fake!

Face as fresh as,
Morning due,
Even a glance,
Is worth a queue!

Spreading its bliss,
With a blushful smile,
Making life,
So beautifully agile!

Now that I got this poem read,
Just look at a baby of three or two,
Get your suffering all allayed,
A baby of three or two, yes thats true…

-Pratheek M Reddy

Dedicated to Dr. Padmaja Fertility Centre, Hyderabad


Pleased to recieve your comments, appriciation and criticism (if any)… Hope it was worth a good read…!!


8 thoughts on “Heavenly Present…!!

  1. Its a great piece dear, you conveyed the thought of how wonderful babies are very well, the only critique I would give is to reread your poetry before you post and correct any spelling mistakes. You wrote due, instead of dew, and I wasn’t sure what this word (crores) was suppose to be, other than that I think you write well. 😀 Happy writing.

      1. Haha… You did… Lakhs and crores are ised in Indian enhlish where as you must be using millions and billions… The values are different though…

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